feedback from other group

Genre : Overall we feel you have used many conventions that fit your video, girl, urban setting, bling, clubbing, car, police..etc well done.

Relationship : Gestures to explain the lyrics (mostly hand gestures)

Camerawork : Great camera, variations of angles, last shot where he punches camera is good.

Editing : Green screened car in background looks good. Well edited, shots go in time with music, good pace. Would change the white background.

Mise-en-scene : Cars fit in well with the genre. As does graffiti. Clothing is typical of what you would expect. All the mise-en-scene fits into the genre of the song effectively, bling, girls, money, cigar etc. Good inconography

Special effects : Green screen is good convention to use but doesn't look real. split screen was good,