Camera Work: good varity of shots and locations, fits well with genre, steady camera, good zooming,.....someone said we needed more of a varity of shots
Editing: editng fits in palce with music, good pace and angles, difernt shots put together , rapid shots, editing looks sharp eg the lights changing colour, good lpsyncing, runs along smoothly
Effects: Good cutaway especially the car, pushing shot of man standing at end is great and creates mystery, editing sits in pace with music, fast motion works well,....green screen needs to be done
Mise en scene/Perfomance: props are realistic eg car, studio mike, club etc and cigar, fits with lyrics, speacker shots effective, fits well with the genre, good use of bling, chain , necklace, props work well, very sterotypical, works well with song, convincing and fun, perfomance mixed with cut aways, great locations, added in limos, good perfomance, really got into it, good energy and very believable
continuity: fits with lyrics, it makes sense, smooth, obviously knows words,.......a bit out of sync with music